
Happy Friday!
I hope everyone has had a terrific week!
Today, I’m posting the second scene from chapter two of A BREATH OF MAGIC. Here are the links to the prior three excerpts I’ve posted:
Chapter One / Scene One
Chapter One / Scene Two
Chapter Two / Scene One
This is the final excerpt I’m posting for now, but I should have the “Browse the Book” feature on my web site soon, which gives a little more of a peek. I’m just waiting for it to show up at my publisher’s site so I can share it here. I’ll be sure to post when it’s up!
And here is Chapter Two: Scene Two — Enjoy!
A BREATH OF MAGIC
By Tracy Madison
Available May 2010 from Leisure Paranormal Romance
ISBN 10: 0505528363 / ISBN 13: 978-0505528360
Chapter Two: Scene Two
Alice drove us to a small, historic hotel in Chicago’s central business district. From what I gathered on the ride over, Verda and my friend had hatched their kidnapping plan within minutes of leaving my place. They’d contacted Elizabeth, who’d jumped on board, taking care of “other details.”
Those details were apparently the hotel room I now sat in. Three chairs formed a half circle around a fourth—mine—in the center. A few lit candles were scattered around the room, their vanilla scent filling the air, and soft music played in the background. If I were there with a guy, I’d have thought it was a scene set for seduction. In this case, I figured they were trying to relax me. Which was so not happening.
“She’s angry. That’s why she won’t talk,” said Elizabeth. “Maybe this wasn’t such a hot idea.”
“Of course she’s angry. But she didn’t give us much choice in the matter,” said Grandma Verda. “And she can leave anytime she wants. It’s not like we have her tied down.”
Leave and go where? Traversing the streets of Chicago in the middle of the night, in my pj’s, was not a smart move. I didn’t have any cash on me for cab fare, and I distinctly remembered Kyle powering off his cell before going to bed. I had zero options. Which, I’m sure, was the entire point.
“We should have waited a few days.” Elizabeth rubbed her eyes. “Or at least until morning.”
“No. Grandma’s right,” said Alice, who for some reason had a baby rattle clutched in her grip. The toy belonged to her daughter, but Rose wasn’t with us. “This can’t wait. She acted totally out of character tonight. The quicker we resolve this, the better for everyone.”
“Hello? Crazy women? I’m right here. Stop talking around me!”
Verda winked, as if delighted by my outburst. “Oh, good! You’ve decided to talk! We can get started now.”
“Started with what?” I crossed my arms, absolutely positive the forthcoming conversation was not one I wanted to have.
“Your intervention, of course. Unless you’d like a snack before we begin? Elizabeth brought goodies,” said Verda. “Cookies, I think.”
“My what?” I tightened my hands into fists.
“Intervention,” Verda said again. “This is a safe place. We’re here for you.”
While I’m quite sure she meant to reassure me, the result was anything but reassuring. I glared at Alice. “What is she talking about? And it better not be about Kyle, because that horse is dead and buried. Why can’t you just be happy for me?”
“Wait!” Verda grabbed the baby rattle from Alice. “We need to go over the rules.”
First a kidnapping, then an intervention, and now rules? Awesome. The night I became engaged would definitely live in my memory, just not in the way I’d hoped. Holding my hands up in defeat, I muttered, “Fine. What are the rules?”
Verda shook the toy, the clattering nearly loud enough to overwhelm the music. “Whoever has the rattle is allowed to talk. If you don’t have the rattle, you can’t say anything unless you’re asked a question by the person who’s holding it.”
Elizabeth and Alice nodded in agreement and looked at me. At that second, it became clear how serious they were. Suddenly, the thought of walking home in my pajamas became a lot more appealing. What were the chances I’d be kidnapped twice on the same night, anyway? They had to be low. Low enough to risk it.
“This is ludicrous. You all realize that, right?” I said evenly. “I don’t need an intervention because I’m engaged.”
“This won’t work unless you’re open to the process.” Verda sighed, her eyes bright with emotion. “We’re family, and we care about you. All we ask is that you give this a shot. Okay?”
“Do I have a choice?”
Elizabeth waved her hands in the air. Grandma Verda tossed the rattle to her. “Listen,” she said. “We’ve all noticed some changes in you, and we’re concerned. I think you’re more upset about not receiving the magic than anything else. What do you think?”
I shook my head, not wanting to respond. I was related to these women by blood, which meant I deserved the gift just as much as Elizabeth and Alice. They had their magic, but where was mine? “I already answered that.”
“Right. You did, but I don’t believe you.”
I gritted my teeth so I wouldn’t argue.
Verda retrieved the rattle. “Try to be open to this,” she reminded me. “We can’t help unless you tell us how you really feel!”
Elizabeth snatched the toy back. “It would bother me,” she admitted. “I would care very much if the people closest to me had something I should have but didn’t. I would feel left out. Alone. And maybe I’d stop believing in the things I used to. Is that’s what’s going on, Chloe?”
The walls closed in. I pushed out a shallow breath, trying to alleviate the suffocating pressure. It didn’t work. What she said had hit a nerve. I had a choice here: tell them this part of the truth, like they thought they wanted, and open the wound that had only begun to close, or continue the charade.
“Nothing is going on,” I said, choosing the charade.
“Why won’t you talk to us?” Liz inhaled a breath, and a tiny grin appeared. “Besides, I think your magic has started.”
Okay, this was not a development I’d expected. “What do you mean?” I asked, barely daring to hope.
“The cake, Chloe. I was somehow…compelled…to do what you wanted, to cast that wish. And I’m telling you now, I had no intention of agreeing.”
I thought back to that moment in the bakery, to everything that had occurred. Maybe, just maybe, I’d be able to believe Elizabeth if the family ghost, Miranda, the source of the Gypsy magic, had visited me even once. But she hadn’t, and from what I knew, that only meant one thing. I shook my head. “No. Nothing happened that was magical. But thanks for trying. Really.”
Alice reached over and grasped the rattle. “If it’s not the magic, then what? Why do you think you’ve changed?”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” I shot back, still going with the charade. “Changed how?”
“You refused to look at the picture.” Leaning forward, she centered her brown-eyed gaze on me. “The old Chloe, the one who tackled life instead of being resigned to it, would have leaped at that drawing. But you didn’t. And that’s when I got scared. That’s when I realized something was very wrong.”
She was right. The old Chloe would have jumped for joy. But I wasn’t that Chloe now, and thinking about that drawing, and about whatever future of mine that magic had shown Alice, would ruin everything. I shrugged, as if I couldn’t care less. “People change. That’s life.”
“Bull. Not like this. You’re a completely different person.”
So are you, I thought. Saying that, though, would just hurt her. “What do you want from me?”
“I want the truth. Whatever it is, Chloe, just lay it on me.”
I noticed that Verda and Elizabeth had scooted their chairs back slightly, to give me and Alice an impression of privacy. Nice of them, but totally unnecessary. Because I didn’t plan on telling Alice the truth. Not now, not ever. So what if I felt left out? So what if I felt forgotten in the happiness of her new life? If she knew, not only would she be hurt, but it might damage our friendship even more.
She continued to stare at me, waiting for my answer. Begging me to answer. Reaching deep, I found the anger from earlier. Anger was better than tears. Anger shielded me from everything else.
I grabbed the rattle from Alice’s grasp and shook it. “I’m done here! This is dumb, and all you really want is for me to break things off with Kyle. But that’s not going to happen, so this intervention is over!”
Everyone was silent. Alice shook her head in either disappointment or sadness; I wasn’t sure which. Verda began clearing up the room. After a few more minutes, Elizabeth joined her. But Alice stayed in her chair and just looked at me.
I grinned, trying to ease the tension between us. “I’m sorry. I know you all meant well, but come on… This was a little much.”
“You’re right that it was drastic, but we felt—hoped—that drastic would get your attention and you’d open up to us. To me.”
“I know you don’t believe me, but I’m fine. Really I am. I just wish you could be happy for me.” Squeezing my thumb and forefinger together, I said, “Just a little bit? Can you do that for me?”
Indecision colored her features, and I thought she was going to say no. But then a glint appeared in her eyes and she smiled. “I can be, yes, if you’ll do one thing for me. Just one.”
Immediately suspicious—because, come on, with the night I’d had, why wouldn’t I be?—I said, “What’s the one thing?”
Before answering, she called out to Verda. “Hey, Grandma? Do you mind if Chloe uses your car tonight? Elizabeth can take us home.”
“I can?” asked Elizabeth.
“Yes, you can.” Alice’s tone was firm.
My curiosity and my suspicion climbed.
“Um, yeah, whatever,” Elizabeth said.
“That’s fine, dear,” Verda agreed. “I trust Chloe with Greta.”
Greta? Cute. She’d named her car. I thought only men did that. “What’s the one thing, and why do I need Verda’s car to do it?”
With a smile very reminiscent of Verda’s canary-swallowing version, Alice said, “I want you to stay here, in this room, for an hour after we leave. You’ll need the car to get home, but we’ll come by for it later.”
“That’s it? Truly?”
“That’s it. Consider it a little ‘me time.’”
While I figured there was more to her request, and honestly, I’d had plenty of time alone over the last few months, I couldn’t say no. I desperately wanted my best friend at my wedding. And really, what could an hour do? “Okay. You have a deal.”
Pleased, Alice stood and gave me a tight hug. “I’m going to help them carry everything out to the car, and then I’ll be back.”
“I thought it was supposed to be alone time?”
“It is. I’ll only be here for a few minutes.” Another quick hug. “Be right back.”
I washed my face while I waited, using the activity to keep my emotions in check—something I’d gotten pretty good at lately. Then I paced the room, not wanting to sit down, but unable to stand still. For the first time, I wondered why they’d brought me here, to this hotel, for their intervention. There were plenty of hotels closer to my home.
Before I could give it any further thought, Alice barged in. She tossed Verda’s car keys on the bed. “You remember where we parked?”
“Yep. Just down the street a little.”
“The hour doesn’t start until I leave,” she pushed.
“Then maybe you should leave?” I stifled a yawn. “I’m sorry, I’m just really tired.”
“It’s okay.” She walked to the other side of the room and took a seat on the wide windowsill. “Come here, there’s something I want to show you.”
“I’m not looking at that drawing, Alice!”
She showed me her empty hands. “I don’t have it with me. Come here. Please.”
Hesitantly, I crossed the room and sat next to her on the sill. “What?”
Turning her head, she looked out the window. “It’s still dark out, but do you see that building across the street? The one with all the black glass?”
I played along and glanced out the window. “Yeah. It’s sort of big, and there are streetlights, and I’m not blind. Kind of hard to miss a building, Alice. So what’s this all about?”
“In that building is an architectural firm called Malone & Associates. Have you ever heard of them?”
“No. Why?”
“I lied to you last year,” she said, changing the subject. “Remember when you asked me to use my magic to draw a picture of your wedding day, and I told you that nothing happened?”
My throat tightened. “So…it did work? You drew my wedding day, and you’ve had that drawing for this long?” Somehow I’d thought the drawing was a recent thing, something done at the last minute to try to change my decision. The knowledge that she’d had it for nearly a year spun around in my head, clogging everything up. A shiver rolled down my spine, and a hairline crack appeared in the wall I’d built around myself. “Why didn’t you tell me before?”
“To protect that day. To protect your future.”
Okay. Whatever. It didn’t matter. This altered nothing. “So why are you telling me now?”
She nodded toward the building. “Shortly after I drew your wedding day, I was having tea at a café up the road. And the man from your drawing—your groom—strolled in to buy a cup of coffee.” Her eyes gripped mine. “I followed him, Chloe. And he walked to that building, to Malone & Associates, swiped a card to unlock the door and let himself in. Which means he probably works there.”
I didn’t respond. I couldn’t. The hairline crack widened, and the wall began to crumble. “No. I don’t want to know this. Not now.”
Alice stood and pointed out the window. “Don’t you get it, sweetie? Your happily-ever-after is literally across the street. Not lying in your bed, sleeping. Across the freaking street.” With that, she turned on her heel and left the room.
I sat there for longer than my promised hour of “me time,” long enough to see the early sun of the morning. I didn’t once remove my gaze from that building. My body trembled at the very thought, I wanted to grab on to this new future so badly. But actually taking the steps toward that future, the one I couldn’t see, petrified me beyond reason. Kyle was safe. Comfortable. And I could visualize my future with him.
Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes and turned away from the window. Then and only then did I open them. Numb, cold and exhausted, I retrieved the car keys. Then I left and drove home to where Kyle waited.
And–ah–that’s it! Have a great weekend!
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